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Posh Bit Of Nosh (EXTREME ADULT CONTENT)


It was a good two hours drive to Minehead,
I had prepared everything needed for my away trip.

Flask of hot coffee, my special rump sandwich,
was calling for my attention.


Hehehe, and of course lets not forget about you
my trusty Scalpel.


Hehehe, hehehe...

How I wondered about that quaint little village there,

would it still be the perfect hunting ground?

H'm mm... Blond, Brunette, Mousy Brown, Maybe Ginger tonight.

Choices, Choices, Choices, Hahaha... Hahaha.
who knows what my twitching Scalpel will be wanting for.

 

My heart now racing...
thoughts rushing through my head...

KILL THEM... KILL THEM ALL... FUCKING WHORES...


I quickly laughed to myself and spared a thought
for that dopey Inspector Bramley.
What a mess I'd left for him last time, Ah Fuck Him,

I must give him something fresh, Fucking fresh it will be.


Hahaha, hahaha, hahaha...

I slowly dreamed of another perfect murder scenario

and hoped that she would not be to dazed and confused this time.

I must see her gasping for life, but no screams, no attention noises,
begging always makes me twitch and rush... H'm mm, Yes, Yes, Yes...

I was disappointed with my last victim

maybe I had over done it on the date rape drug?

Yes, Yes, that must of been it,

but this will be different this time...

 

Oh yes Scalpel it will... Hahaha, hahaha, hahaha...

The next signpost appeared only 20 Miles to go now,

ah yes my friend not long now Scalpel, not long now.


Next turning at the round about then second left

I drive past a row of Bungalows down a country lane..

H'm mm... Maybe a bit of posh flesh tonight Scalpel?
maybe indeed... Hehehe, Hehehe...

Double checking my route planner


There it was, just down the lane,

I hoped the parking spot I had planned

was still undisturbed and unused.


I don't believe it...

 

Hahaha, hahaha, hahaha


In front of me a young lady wandering up the lane,

has she got a death wish, or is she positively fucking stupid?

Doesn't she know there are sick fuckers out at night

eager to devour her body in more ways than one?
Fucking brilliant, what say, we say hi Scalpel...


H'm mm... Very posh bit of nosh the sort of posh
I'd like to fucking slice off...

Hehehe, hehehe, hehehe...

Getting out of the car,

I quickly checked no one else is around... Perfect!


Hi, could you please help me?

I'm a bit lost, and I've been looking for the Rose and Crown Pub.


I quickly studied her flesh eying up her textures,

what a remarkable body line she had.

And her facial structure, was that of a model'

I would say she was of a good age of around 29,
maybe 30... Strawberry blond and fit as a fiddle!

H'm mm, I was shaking with excitement

my body having the strongest twitches ever'


No need to search for flesh, not tonight,

maybe fate had brought her to me and my trusty Scalpel.

Either way she was the one. tonight it was her...

I'm not sure what I favor first, H'm mm?
suddenly she opened her sweet lips.


"It's about half a mile down the lane Sir"


Her fragrance invades my senses

my eagerness to slaughter her;

was growing at an unstoppable pace.

 

Fuck me was she gorgeous,

I couldn't wait to slice her open

and to taste her sweet flesh.


My Scalpel felt like fire to the touch...

Calling to me to slaughter her now!


I couldn't hold back any longer

releasing the scalpel from my jacket pocket,

I delivered the Scalpel to her beautiful neck.

Slash, slash, slash... always a perfect slice...

Oh yes... Oh yes... Hahaha, hahaha, hahaha...

She staggered backwards and gurgles,

her hot blood jetting across my face.

I watched with excitement as she grasps for air,

finally she collapses on the floor, one shake, then two.

I whisper to her dieing carcass, and tell her she will be famous...

My Scalpel ready in hand to take another trophy home

licking my lips, lapping up her fluids from my face.

I turn her over on too her back and study her curves,

 

'Oh yes,

her buttocks looked succulent

Not too fat, and firm to the touch...

H'm mm... No I must watch my Cholesterol levels..


My trusty Scalpel wanders along her dead curves

stopping above her right arm,

but no, not this time...


Unlike my trusty Stanley,

my Scalpel begins to take me to
a new piece of flesh.

I twitched with excitement...


Oh my... Really Scalpel...

is that what you want of me? 

 

Hehehe, hehehe, hehehe...

Stopping above her pussy

now enticing me with another vision.

 

H'm mm, Interesting choice Scalpel...Interesting!


With precision I slowly start cutting through her slender flesh
taking care not to be to messy.


Her cunt flesh was pulsating in my hands,
a massive orgasm shudders through my member.

 

"Oh my God, I never thought it would be this way"

 

H'm mm... What a clever Scalpel you are

finally finished, I put my trophy in the bag.


Covering up her sweet body, I decide to pop her carcass
into the back of the car, and head home for a spot of lunch.

 

"Waste not... want not Scalpel"

 

My twitching now subsides,

I look forward to the journey home

and the thoughts of eating more flesh...

 

Hahaha, Hahaha, Hahaha...
















 

Author notes

**WARNING EXTREME ADULT CONTENT**

2)The mind of a killer

A carry on from previous poems/short story's
(1)My names Stanley whats yours?
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3467556
(2)Inspector Bramley and the search for Stanley
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3524256
3) A Shade Of Rose
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3554594

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 20

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    Your many trophies show what a great piece this is. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper

  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    August 27

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    Well this is just downright disturbing lol. You have totally made me want to go outside (it is daylight here) just to be sure someone isn't lurking around. Well done on a good story. Best to you
  • wow this was amazing yet again pleasure and murder mm!
    your an amazing dark writer and i seem to get lost into your stories, this was pure amazing hun
    all my love thanks for entering
    -kitty xxx

  • Venus25
    August 2

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    Bloody Hell

    Whoa.... This totally freaked me out!

    I was hooked from the start, what an amazing insight to a killers mind!

    Chilling but wonderful!

    This is one i shall revisit

  • great one this may be long but it was well worth the read thanks for entering
  • Great piece. I like the story of it all. If it t'was not for this pills I'd write a better comment. But I really did enjoy it. Thanks for evertering.

  • Personally, I think I would have gone for the nipple. Excellent piece. Thank you for entering and good luck!

    • Timespell
      April 2
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      I think that can easily be arrange on my next away trip...lol

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • hehehe, hehehe

    omg ur a genius!
    Fuck me was she gorgeous,

    I couldn't wait to slice her open

    and to taste her sweet flesh...
    'Oh yes,

    her buttocks looked succulent

    Not too fat, and firm to the touch...

    H'm mm... No I must watch my Cholesterol levels..
    I love these lines..
    And talking to the scalpel, his best friend, whoa
    Freaky!! I'm hungry for more, TimeSpell<3






    • Timespell
      March 19
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      LOL... I really should have another away trip, indeed the memories of her sweet flesh still send shivers too my toe's.

      But alas I am finding it hard to start another one on this character...HEHEHE.

      Thanks for wandering through my dark side.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • Florida Sunshine gold member
    February 8

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    Well, I certainly see why this has been awarded ~ it is VERY twisted ~ definately the mind of a killer ~ SCAREY!!!!! I'm sure I'm going to have nightmares~ for sure ~

    Thanks for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ I really appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ Best of luck to you!!!

  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    January 29

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    I will probally come back and comment again later I am just not sure about this if not thanks for your entry.

    • Timespell
      January 30
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      Thanks for reading and commenting on this one. This is not everybody's cup of Tea, so to speak. But it is a follow on from previous story's regarding this Serial Killer. I have just been trying to extend the story of this Character, so this means it will obviously start reading a lot "DARKER & TWISTED" Most serial killers in history have committed, heinous acts of mutilation on there victims.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    January 20

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    This one is very sexy and disturbing. Love the detail of the piece and although it was long, it was worth reading as it told a disturbing yet intense story. I enjoyed reading this, I'll have to read another one... Like the maniacal laugh you use, I can just imagine the voice.

    • Timespell
      January 20
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      Thank You

      Thanks for awarding this Story with the Silver Trophy. It now makes me want to write another little tale, regarding our friend Stanley...hahaha, hahaha, hahaha,

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


    • Timespell
      January 20
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      HEHEHE...

      Yes, It's about time I wrote another one on Stanley. Such an interesting Gentlemen...LOL
      But I think I have one on Inspector Bramley to catch up on first. That will keep the story line going so to speak.

      Thanks again for reading and commenting on this one.

      All the best,



      ~T.S~

  • CherryOnTop
    January 19
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    A intense thrilling murder mystery. Good luck in my contest.

  • glued-to
    January 11

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    wow. this reads like a person losing their mind..i love it . its a little hard to follow and lackign some poetic value but overall fantastically creepy and eerie. i like the little hehehe and hahaha it remidns me a bit of crime and punishment's Porfiry. the obsession with the butts of the victims is a most unusual twist and also very disturbing how the killer is turned on by this..hm is this inspired by sweetney todd? jw. and also very freaky side note i live next to a pub called rose and crown soooo . but excellent poem overall.

  • PerfectImperfection
    December 24, 2007

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    A well thought tale of sorts. Demented, abrasive, and poignant - Oh my! A few tiny bumps in the poetic road, but otherwise very well penned. Thank you for your entry!

    • Timespell
      December 24, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and commenting on this one

      Merry Xmas

      ~T.S~

  • georgie
    December 21, 2007

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    maybe you should try me... ill shave my head so u cant choose by colour choice... altho at the moment its mahogany... but i also have a collection of blades... one of which i sleep with lol... and that is the truth. i loved this piece and im def gonna check out more,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx
    p.s. not my real name

    • Timespell
      December 21, 2007
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      HEHEHE

      LOL...

      Thanks for reading and commenting on my little collection regarding Stanley...HEHEHE

      I would say there will be a few more to come from this character, but I will need to get my mindset on so to speak.

      Thanks again.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • Ithica silver member
    December 12, 2007

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    Yuck! This is definately not for the squeamish is it? I hope I don't have nightmares. Theis was really gruesome, of cousre you already KNOW THAT! Congrats. on the Silver...


    • Timespell
      December 13, 2007
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      LOL

      Yes it's not for the squeamish...Hahaha

      Thanks for reading.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • psychiatrists dream
    November 30, 2007
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    wow, that was amazingly written, well done!thanks for entering and good luck!


    • Timespell
      November 30, 2007
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      Thanks for reading, I am glad you liked this one of mine. I was not sure which one to put in your contest. I have done a few on this character...

      Thanks again for reading and commenting.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • Demon of the Fall
    November 27, 2007

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    Quite good. I like the story, and your characterization of the murderer was very well done. I like the way you use the main character's voice to good effect in this piece, it's believable and disturbing. There are a few lines here and there that sound a little awkward. And the vulgarity towards the end was a bit of a shock, but taking into account the personality of the character I suppose it's appropriate. I really want to leave a more in depth comment here but the moderators are rushing me to get this contest judged so I shall return to this at a later date hopefully.

    • Timespell
      November 28, 2007
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      Thanks for awarding this with the Silver trophy... I hope to do a few more on this subject. When I have the Mindset so to speak! Disturbing to actually write down this sort of stuff but then again, Serial Killers are sick mothers!!

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • Lord Merlynn
    November 19, 2007

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    this is one demented write, very nicely done. I like this one, and goodf luck in the contest. Keep the muse flowing, and thanks for entering.

    • Timespell
      November 28, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thanks for reading this entry, he is a bit of a sick puppy. Most of the serial Killers do sick shit!

      All the best

      ~T.S~

  • Crimson Viper
    November 12, 2007

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    ... this scared me... all I can say... hah. good luck in the contests. *please dont' hurt me!!!!!!!! I didn't do anything! I swear!!!*

    Crimson

    • Timespell
      November 13, 2007
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      Be Scared

      He is getting sicker by the minute this is just the start...HAHAHA... HAHAHA

      Thanks for reading,

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Great job, ahahha totally killer, and loved it, you made me laugh so hard, and the heheheheheh's and hahahahah's, thats just perfect. It's defoently i sick mind here, but i love it. Great emotion and magery, great!!!
    thank you soo much, and good luck
    stephanie =]

    • Timespell
      November 7, 2007
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      He is starting to be one "Sick Puppy... How will it all end? Not sure myself...LOL But there are a few more storys in line for this sick mother...

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • ExpectingMommy18
    November 5, 2007

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    wow this was one of the best out of your whole collection!
    i liked this one,things start to unfold now.
    you did a great job with this peice.the only mistake i found was i think it would be line 58,it says ever way she was the one shouldnt it be "either" or it could even be "every" whichever you chose. i didnt see any other problems with this,like i said you did a great job with this one!!

    • Timespell
      November 5, 2007
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      Thanks Razor

      Glad you like this latest tell of Stanley. Will see when I come up with another sicker one... LOL

      Thanks again for reading and commenting.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    November 4, 2007

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    HOLY FUCK!

    I HAD A FUCKIN ORGASM READING THIS!!!!!!!!
    AHHHHH, YOU ARE SOOOO GOOD AT THIS STUFF!
    Dammit, i'm so glad you're writing like this now!!!!!
    YEAH, THAT WONDERING WOMAN......FUCK, THAT WOULD BE ME!

    Not stupid......SMART!
    I GREATLY ENJOYED THIS READ!!!!!! YOU ARE JUST AMAZING!


    • Timespell
      November 5, 2007
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      LOL

      Hehehe... Yes he his getting sicker in this one...LOL

      Glad you like the plot of this one... LOL

      All the best

      ~T.S~

      • Synthetic-Nightmare
        November 5, 2007
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        yep, he's DEFINITELy getting sicker which is WHAT I LOVE SO MUCH ABOUT IT!!!!!!

        • Timespell
          November 5, 2007
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          It can only get more sicker from this point onwards... I have to do an Inspector Bramley Version to catch up!!! LOL...H'mmmmm
          Hummy....Hum,HUM
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