I watch her every afternoon when she comes home,
her gorgeous body wrapped in red silk.
She sets down her purse on the night stand,
slowly she walks over to the window and opens the blinds.
One by one she pulls at the buttons on her dress,
slowly she drops it to the bedroom floor.
My heart starts to pound instantly as I sit here,
across the street in my own bedroom.
She pulls the ribbons from her long blonde hair,
and steps out and away from her dress.
So beautiful like a goddess in the night,
she leaves me breathless and wanting more.
She takes a fresh rose from the vase on her table,
then carefully lies down on her back.
She teases herself by running it up and down her body,
her freshly shaven mound starts to drip down onto the bed.
I feel a stirring sensation deep within my body,
just watching her sends an erotic vibe throughout me.
She rolls over to the dresser on her left,
and starts to sort through an assortment of toys.
She pulls out a pink vibrator, turns it on, and inserts it.
I can almost hear her squirm as I see her lips move.
Over and over again she plunges it deep into her mound,
she cooes and screams as her body starts to tremble.
She cums all over it and brings it to her breasts,
the rubber cock begins to drip all over her.
Rubbing it all over her body as she squeezes her breasts.
She places the vibrator in her mouth and sucks the remaining juices.
Sated, she sits up and throws her long blonde hair behind her.
She looks out the window but, she can't see me.
She stands naked before me still dripping wet,
she watches the birds fly through the city.
I muster the courage and walk over to the sliding door,
she sees me as I blow her a kiss and smile.
She points her finger at me and motions me to come over.
Without hesitation, I slip on my jeans and run out the door.
At last, the erotic encounter I have been waiting for.
I can feel my cock twitch as I run down the stairs and into the city.
As I arrive I see a note that reads "Room 69 For Love"
I make my way over there and knock on the door.
She answers it still naked from head to toe.
I pick her up and throw her gorgeous body onto the bed.
She asks me how long I have been watching her.
Ignoring her question, I start to thrust into her.
She looks deep into my eyes and tells me,
"I have seen you so many times across the street,
even in darkness you still can be seen."
Red faced, I tell her about my fantasies.
How every night I have waited for this moment.
I know now that she was teasing me all along,
as I sat watching, admiring, and lusting for her
from my window across the street.
Author notes
Picture Prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- Winner Takes All #1 [Erotica] by PhantomsAngel87.
600 points, ended November 15, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Adult Pre Write Party by theredcatjazzoflove.
600 points, ended May 23, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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for some reason i just kept waiting for a punch line
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does your mother know you write stuff like this in her basement? -
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LOL! I don't live with my mother anymore and never spent any time in the basement!
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wow this is great!
She cums all over it and brings it to her breasts,
the rubber cock begins to drip all over her.
Rubbing it all over her body as she squeezes her breasts.
She places the vibrator in her mouth and sucks the remaining juices
the pic. is so ummm... what can I say sexy!!!!!!!
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OMFG lol *jaw drops and drools* tht pic is so damn hot! ahh lol good job
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Oh .. now that is hot and sexy and just ain't fair
you blew me away with this one.. best of luck
dear brother.. not sure if you need it as it has
gold written all over it.. and not just the one you have won already
Riftkin
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i love this only a many reasons one because a poet i have a lot of respect for Griswold we penned something in this area and you really got in touch with your desires and you said yes i am in the buliding with my lust and i want to pollute pleasure and i fucken love it !
yes it was pleasurable
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Kind of a sex version of Rear Window eh? lol great write
Mylee -
This is amazing! Nice job! Sexy, indeed! Great Story
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hey, I;m deleting the contest but re making it please re enter if you want to..i really liked your poem, thanks
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HOLY FRIGGIN SHIT!! lolz..wow that was amazing!!...I totally dig the picture to..you drew a very nice picture having me wonder what was going to happen next..damn!!..THAT WAS HOTT!!
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*excused to go deal with personal needs*
back well that got a rise out of me. holy cow, that was amazing -
hot
I enjoyed this..very hot -
Wow that got me going lol. Love it
<3 Rogue
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This was amazing. Very well written and seductive. As Ms. Kitty Kat said, "steamy".
This was definately worth a gold and I haven't even read the other poems in the contest.
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Awesome, great job. I was rooted to my seat through out all of this. congratulations on winning the gold. this is very steamy and I enjoyed reading it.
kathy
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Holy Moly!!
Wowzers!!
What a Powerful Erotic piece You have penned my Friend and certainly take the reader on a Journey into the highest of proportions
Congratulations on Your Achievements
-throws confetti-
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Keep that quill dancing!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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amazing
i really felt this and well lol i liked it... i saw every movement she made and heard everything that came from her lips
BRAVO!
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Congratulations!
My friend this was an excellent piece.
The visuals were off the hook. You told a
wonderful story that evoked passion and
erotica in its rawness. I think you did
a very good job on this contest.
Bravo and Congratulations again.
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wow...good luck on da contest!
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Wicked write
One word HOT!! Keep up your good work
~sugar~
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wow, this is very good. I love the way you wrote this! it has such great imagery! man, I am going to need a cold shower after this! lmao. keep up your great work! good luck in both contests!
Crimson -
Erotic. I loved it. Very talented you are. I felt as if I was in the write.
Silvos.
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hahaha says dont mention name and they did lmao so funny. This piece indeed i read yesterday and had to come back to it.
Sheesh man. Is all i am going to say... Well penned full of power..
best of luck to you always
tory
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this deff will heat up and knock the chills from my bad cold away. makes me think of daydreams that i have had of a certian guy i have feelings for but not to this degree of hot sensuality. well done my dear friend many blessings always xxxx
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wow thats awesome!!!
What a great detailed story!!
So creative!
I love it!
Good luck in my contest! -
G'day Jeremy ♥
Wellllllllllll I only just stepped outta a nice hot shower after being the in the icy rain outside but I think I need to step in the rain again !
Very sexy and hoooot write
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Outstanding my friend....
what a picture prompt this is...indeed
Wonderful imagery from start to finish, I think you did a wonderful job with this tonight.
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