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Sweet Surrender

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Clouds floating away
blue skies leaving me breathless
sigh, sweet surrender

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  • SilverButterfly gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    Jeremy this is so soothing a write! love the idea:

    GBY
    SilverButterfly


  • Ryno
    November 8, 2007

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    Really strong last line there, ends with a really good note... all these haikus everyone is producing are so beautiful... great work. Thanks for the entry.