Beautiful rainbows
lighting up the summer sky
captivating hearts
Author notes
Haiku
In a list
A contest entry
- Super Quickie: Haiku times 42! by Ryno.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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I wanted to comment on one of your haikus but I couldn't pick my favorite. I've always loved haikus, but i've never been that good at them. I picked to comment this one because I love rainbows, they are beautiful, and this is a beautiful peice.

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Great job with this, penned really beautifully, much like the Rainbow
"Captivating Hearts". I really like that because it is so true. When a rainbow comes, everyone will run to see it.... it is the peace of nature. Thank-you for the entry!
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i love rain bows




