this tiny pad of paper is the projection of my life
it will show you clips of my emotional journeys
its the eyes for my soul
the window to my existence
some people talk or scream some cry or fight
But i express whats inside when i write
i drown my paper with emotions using my pen
I smile, and write, cry and write rip it up and do it again
just something i jotted down today its yet another unfinished
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I love the image of not being happy with what you see in your life and ripping it up, it 's like burning letters, isn't it?
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Interesting piece. I like this lots. It's a unique perspective on an emotion experienced my most (if not all) writers. Well done, poetess. One.
Dez
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this is OUTSTANDING. I think this s a great piece and is very effective and emotional. It's unfinsihed? i think you should leave it - its sweet,short and simple
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I liked this poem a lot. As someone else mentioned I feel like this captures very well how I myself feel about writing. I really liked how it started out, mentioning how it will show clippings of your experiences. Good job!
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Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it.
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eww
i kinda feel alot of the same when i write
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Awsome!
this is really good I like it a lot!!!!
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