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To Rhyme Or Not To Rhyme

Poetry that does not rhyme is simply quite absurd

It cannot hold a candle to the metered rhyming word

To find the words and syllables to make the verses flow

Is often times a daunting task, as rhyming poets know

 

When the perfect words appear there’s not a sound that’s sweeter

Than gentle rhyming verses in a smoothly flowing meter

Like the revered bards of old that wrote the rhymes of ages

They dance in perfect cadence as they waltz across the pages

 

Free verse on the other hand is simply a disaster

Scattered bits of jumbled words a chimpanzee could master

Although I did find use for it I really have to say

When I ran out of toilet paper just the other day

 

I really haven’t figured out what hurts my stomach worse

A bout of diarrhea or a dose of free styled verse

Now I don’t mean to sound too harsh or stir up a big fuss

Someday the poor non-rhymers may become as good as us

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  • Sokarjo
    December 4

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    Oh too funny! My brother said you were his favourite poet, and I see why!! I have to admit, I did write one freestyle once... but I so much prefer rhyme! (As long as it's not forced of course). And yours is one of the best I've ever read! Bravo!

  • Topnotchsy
    July 8

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    Haha, loved this poem. Was a little surprised by it until I read the contest which suddenly made everything make sense (though I do prefer rhyming poetry over free verse 99% of the time.)

    Really liked these lines:

    Like the revered bards of old that wrote the rhymes of ages

    They dance in perfect cadence as they waltz across the pages


    Free verse on the other hand is simply a disaster

    Scattered bits of jumbled words a chimpanzee could master

  • lol..this was a really cool poem. I lovee reading poems that rhyme...and i wish i could someday be able to write a good rhyming poem( at the moment im totally crap at it..trying to work on it though.)I've not been on this site too often...but i've only really read about people disliking rhyming poetry. (im sure they would change their mind if they read some of your stuff though)

    "I really haven’t figured out what hurts my stomach worse
    A bout of diarrhea or a dose of free styled verse"
    ..loll

    Really enjoyable
    Congratulations on the gold...you truly deserved it.




  • Krista.Marie
    March 8

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    I cannot get over how great you write.
    You actually tell a story in the poetry, and it is understandable.
    You are amazing!
    =)

  • fantasysmurf
    February 16

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    Point taken

    I agree with you. I do like to rhyme, but some people are set against it, Why? Although I like free verse to help me get my point across quickly and directly (especially if Im writing an epic length poem). But some would say that it would be even more reason to rhyme. ANYWAY, you are showing some real gold here as well. Two out of two... and if I like your next poem, guess who's being added to my favourites list?


  • nilav
    February 16
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    the words dancing in the poem give us a smile ,a laugh and some thought....very interesting..


  • januaryrain gold member
    January 12
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    LOL, I love this, even though I have written some free verse, my soul is rhyme

  • My-Insanity
    January 3
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    LMAO

    hahahha... I absolultly love it. it was Halirious, and very well written. I totally agree with you. I believe that is why I love your peotry.. and why i really cant relate to alot of the writters on here. I truley loved this poem. it had a lot of truth and you made it to be quite funny as well.. keep it up.. l@ter

  • Hardy Parkerson
    December 22, 2007

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    One poet said, "If it don't rhyme,/It ain't worth a dime." However, I belive I recall having read from a Robert Frost's writing, and he argued that if that were so, the greatest poem ever written, "The Twenty-Third Psalm", would not be the great piece of poetry that it is. Regardless, rhyme or free verse, you're a great poet, so keep a-writin', Sewasham! Merry Christmas!
    Lake Charles, LA, this 22nd day of December, 2007.
    Sincerely,

    Hardy Parkerson - The Retired Lawyer - Lake Charles, LA



    • Topnotchsy
      August 13
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      There is actually a decent amount of rhyming in Psalm 23 when read in Hebrew as it was originally written. Wouldn't call it structured rhyming, but there is some (Hebrew happens to rhyme a lot easier than English.)

  • Lukey
    December 20, 2007

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    I found it quite amusing
    To read your woeful story
    How poets are abusing
    The art we give such glory
    I'm also fond of rhyming
    As many may attest
    Of measured beats and timing
    I'll often try my best
    Tho' freestyled verse has uses
    It's really not so vile
    Sometimes emotion looses
    Someone needs to share their trial
    I know it's not all pretty
    And its logic's often lacking
    But it would be a pity
    Sending less-skilled poets packing.


  • Mat Larkin
    November 15, 2007

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    you're not well Steve...

    but that's okay...you're sensitive, smart, and very funny...

    And as writers go, one of my fav's. Congrats on an excellent piece! Mat


  • EarthToJim
    November 15, 2007

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    HERESY HERESY

    Someday the poor non-rhymers may become as good as us

    Someone get a shaman, an exorcist, a PLUMBER!

  • ecrivain01 silver member
    November 15, 2007

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    No, they never will ...

    be as good. They might give themselves airs and stick up their noses, but in the end, they'll have nothing left but poses.


  • Zahir
    November 15, 2007

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    Ouchie, you struck a sore nerve there I greatly admire those who can write rhyme and still manage to preserve reason. It might be true that many poets (or, if you prefer that, "poets") writefree verse because they can't find the perfect words, and therefore write free verse to avoid the awkwardness of forced rhyming. But then there are the poets who just can't stop the words flowing out of the tip of their pen, rhyming or not, they come and they mean something, and they touch people. But maybe free verse shouldn'tbe categorized as poetry, but form a whole new genre of literature, just like Christianity first was considered a jewish sect, to later become acknowledged as an own religion.
    But yes, the flowin your poem is indeed music to my ears, although the content isn't. But I remain a follower of Voltaire, this is an important poem, which also the objectors should give at least a thought.


  • Dragon Tamer
    November 14, 2007

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    Frickin Hee-larious!

    This is so surely to start a war if anything ever could Very well done Steve.I'm glad I popped in today to look around.This poem made my day.Thank you for the great laughs, and best of luck in the contest.This is a winner in my eyes
    Don


  • Never Fall in Love gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    haha
    This is amazing
    To some extent I will agree with you because I've been writing for a long time in strictly rhyme. But recently I've started writing free verse and there are some that as just as good. Though there seriously are people who vomit words onto a page and arrange them into a nonsensical order, as my friend george would say (Loves ThomasineGrace)

    Really good
    Never ♥


  • Death of the Author gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    LMFAO. OK I used to be like this and to some extent I still agree. I do think rhyming poetry is a lot harder to master and in the end is better, but some free verse is good. Then again I do love the way you've absolutely trashed it, there are so many gem lines in this:

    It cannot hold a candle to the metered rhyming word

    When the perfect words appear there’s not a sound that’s sweeter
    Than gentle rhyming verses in a smoothly flowing meter

    They dance in perfect cadence as they waltz across the pages

    Scattered bits of jumbled words a chimpanzee could master
    Although I did find use for it I really have to say
    When I ran out of toilet paper just the other day

    I really do love this. Good luck in the contest, I think you may have a war on your hands take care x


  • loveyourfate
    November 14, 2007
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    lol, quite absurd itself... , I like it though. An original poem!


  • SandyToo
    November 14, 2007
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    Fantabulous!

    LOL!!! I loved it! Thanks for that bit of fun.

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