Just looking back at what we've become
A world in turmoil and things left undone
Seems like forever now there's nothing left
Clouds just cover everything and hides the mess
If there's another way out please show me how
To get from this nowhere place to anywhere now
It can't be that difficult but I'm not so sure
Let me shine a light and open a door
I can't see tommorrow past today
If there are any words left I can't say
The future looks bleaker anyway you choose
And those L.A. skies just give me the blues
Yeh! those L.A skies just leave me blue
I got nothing left to give I'm right out of clues
If there's another way out please show me how
To get from this nowhere place to anywhere now
It can't be that difficult but I'm not so sure
Let me shine a light and open a door
I've seen the future and it looks so bleak
It's in the words we never speak
And it's advertised in every place
Taking up all the room in every space
These L.A skies of differing hues
They leave me flat; filled with them blues
These L.A skies all filled with hues
They leave me flat; filled with them blues
L.A skies
L.A skies
L.A skies...
A contest entry
- New Contest....Come And See!!! by leslielovesthomas.
300 points, ended November 21, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cityscape - Los Angeles by Highwaytraveller.
375 points, ended September 3, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Just looking back at what we've become
A world in turmoil and things left undone
Seems like forever now there's nothing left
Clouds just cover everything and hides the mess
oh wowowowow!!!!
this is so frikkin awesome!!!!! I'm not gonna try and say how much i like this because it's beyond that!!!!
but i love this!!!!i love this!!!!
thank you for the entry!! -
Beautiful write!!
I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for sharing!
Thank you for entering and good luck to you in the contest!!!
Leslie
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