I am a person with value
Though I’m not made of precious gold,
A rainbow with an intense hue
Perfect in His restoring mold.
He shares me His wings when I’m down
Life’s pinnacles I can now hold,
A cleansed child living in His town
Perfect in His restoring mold.
Trials now I would gladly take
My Lord’s with me ‘til the world’s old,
Breaking free from the fiery lake
Perfect in His restoring mold.
I am a person with value
Perfect in His restoring mold.
Author notes
option #1
GOD will lift us and perfect us...R. T. Leonard
A Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet).
Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a
refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet
consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning
of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending
couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme
for a Kyrielle Sonnet would be:
AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.
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Another delightful piece...
Another delightful piece; seeing that Man is made in the "image of God", it should be obvious to all that everyone "has value"; nicely done. --Joe
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Beautiful
Thank you for sharing a bit of your testimony with me and others. I loved this poem, The title is great God's Baby Girl, yes you are and so am I. Then the first line I am a person with value is excellent, I just loved the first line. Then the last line Perfect in his restoring mold. Such truth to your poem. It flowed very well and the ryhme is very nice. Excellent, beautiful write. Blessings, Happy Holidays to you
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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I love the message and the intriguing flow of this write touching the universal truth of our life..This is an amazing write revealing the beauty of Almighty just in few simple words..and this is the strength of write..I love this piece..thank you so much for
sharing this great write..well done....
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