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Daydreaming

I daydream about you,
Each time it is something new.
When I look at you smile
I wonder if I’ll wake up in a while.

The lust inside me grows ever stronger
And I cannot stop myself any longer
When I touch your face
I wonder if you lips I could taste?

I want to be inside you more
But not only behind a closed door!
When your tongue touches my ear
I must not wake up with fear.

In the dream world I can no longer stay
And I wake up anyway…

Author notes

Inspired by Janice again, a very sexy friend of mine. She has lots of energy and men and women seems to gravitate to her. Perhaps is just her kindness and selflessness...
Written March 1st, 2001

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  • brad-the-bard
    December 8, 2003
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    Janice, huh. Musica's Janice? Nice one (I mean the poem!). Please publish your others as well (you know, the golden oldies like "the red haired girl" and "Mr Dennis the menace"!).
  • GypsyDreamer
    October 28, 2003
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    Sweet dreams of passion and lust... sometimes it's a shame to wake.
    A great write, wonderful rhyme and flow. Enjoyed very much, Gypsy

  • Desire gold member
    October 26, 2003
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    Keep up the daydream
    More will come
    You will enjoy
    Each and everyone
    The taste,smell and vision
    You see again and again
    Will be more vivid
    From the beginning to end~
    Great write my dear~ So look forward to more~ Big hugs and much love~ Desire
  • serenitychild68
    October 24, 2003
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    Wow, the kinds of erotic dreams that we all have. Kind of gives me the shivers just reading it.