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Don't Judge Me

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Don’t judge me by the scars I wear or the new ones that I make
I might feel pain worse than you could ever even take
Don’t tell me I won’t die alone; won’t shatter, never break
Because every smile I throw at you has always been a fake

Don’t laugh at my false worries of inside my own head
I might feel pain worse than I’ve never said
Don’t think I’m simple; an open book to be read
Because my every feeling I get weighs me down like lead

Don’t think I’m numb because I feel I deserve the pain
I might have urges that are impossible to contain
Don’t smile like I’m a crazy person that needs to be slain
Because I weep and laugh like you, always the same

Don’t judge me by the scars I wear or the new ones I might make
The pain I feel everyday is worse than you could ever take
I know I’ll die alone in pieces from my awful break
Because every smile I throw at you has always been a fake

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Not up to my usual standards, but I wanted to write this one.
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  • ShinyBUBBLESxo
    December 8, 2007

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    I loved this. It flows together, and rhymes well. I could never do that. It's deep, and you can tell it real. I loved it.


    • GiftedPsychosis gold member
      December 9, 2007
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      Thank you very much.
      It is real and I'm glad someone noticed.
      I'm also glad you like it.
      :->

  • Innocent Evil
    November 27, 2007

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    Because every smile I throw at you has always been a fake

    oh... well i know you are a happy person inside SO THERE!! word! well anyway, nice poem! I LOVE IT it flows really well!


  • lemonhead
    November 27, 2007
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    It's great! I love the ryming! And i enjoyed it alot!


  • GlowstickOfLove
    November 27, 2007
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    i know this one :]

  • Vampirekisses1989
    November 27, 2007

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    hey... i like this one that u wrote... By reading it i know that it came from thy heart and thats all very important... I like it when it says every smile i throw at u has always been a fake.... i do that to cuz my family dnt really know me and understand me at all... Great writing and keep up the good work!
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