The sun sets and moon observed
to defy life is all reserved
to me the sips taken are dearer
that I finish and again served
streams of taste are in paradise
precious and scanty here deserved
fate lets lose temper, feel pride
while keeps sharp sabre curved
when taken in to company, shunt
Mir, that is the way preserved.
Author notes
This Ghazal is an eastern form of poetry in which there may be a diversity of theme for any verse.
Please Notify me if be there any shortcoming
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Good, I think i've already heard this word" Ghazal"
a boyfriend of mine , who is Egyptian, had told me that it means a poem dedicated to a woman .anyway , incredible , absolutely loved ur way of writing, it's definitely nice ! -
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Thankyou
Dear Missamy; thankyou for the nice comment, ofcourse the basic idea is love to originate ghazals and is named for that but can contain other ideas in also.
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Very nice. I think you did a great job with this Ghazal. Excellently crafted poetry. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Thanking
Sam! Thankyou for the nice comment and liking the writing.
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