Please
Let go of me
Stop hurting me
You're controlling my every thought and move
You've sunk your fangs deep into my flesh and won't let go
You're killing me
Suffocating me
Blinding me
Hurting me beyond repair
I can't breathe
Can't think
Of anything but you
I literally tremble in your presense
Oh fear
Author notes
I wrote this one in May in the middle of a very bad night with my panic disorder out of control. Instead of sitting in silent fear I let out on pen and paper. If anyone knows the physical symptoms of panic disorder my line "I literally tremble in your presense" was refering to that. Panic attacks suck monkey's balls! Again I ask for no critical comments.
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This indeed a heartfelt picture almost a poetry revealing the depth of the heart..and the heart is once again in great distress..this distress which is the cause and reason for the story of the life and the truth of life and that is very unpredictable..and this has come here with your strong words..well done my friend....
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Thank you so much for the comment. Distress and pain is many times the creator of great stories of life.
~Amanda~
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Argh! I hate panic attacks!
This describes them almost perfectly.
Well done.
- Jojo x sinnocence -
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Thank you for the comment. I hate them too.
~Amanda~
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