I feel calm
When I'm with you
You keep me safe
To start anew
You're in the air
Surrounding me
I hear you speak
Voice reining free
Morning light
On cool fall days
Fills my heart
I'm in a haze
I'm sitting here
But not alone
Around the bend
You've always known
Sweet, the autumn
Blessed grace
I'll leave right now
To see your face.
Author notes
Inspired by the picture. Sorry if I wrote what I saw, I'm a bit out os practice. Hope you like it though.
Cj
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I didn't see the picture, but the lines, I'm sitting here But not alone...adds warmth to the poem...
sunny
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That was very pleasant! I like the 'sitting here/ but not alone.' It's just very hopeful. Great write!
-Dlvvanzor
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this is good sis! I like it. I think it goes with the picture very well. Great job and good luck with the contest!
♥Chelsea
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I do like it! Very well crafted piece of poetry. I thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Wow this is awesome sis! I love how you've put it. Like fall was a person. And I just love how the poem flows. Its such a nice one too.
Truley worthy of a gold medal!
good luck
The harvester
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