some women are like auroras of ones soul,
in that they penetrate to ones abstruse depths,
thus elevating one to stupefying heights,
~unachievable by others~
a woman who mystifies and discombobulates,
one who engages parity of souls and sensibility,
for noesis of heart is ~indeed~ her stock and trade.
who grasps and comprehends ones darkish places.
then elucidates one's fears and trepidations,
comprehending, with glances of emerald luminescence,
which baths those dank places with her love's luminosity.
for she is the resurrection of ones soul.
this loveliest of Silent Knights,
entrancing Emerald Dawns,
as she pens longing, upon;
~ the parchment of my soul~
Please tell me what you think
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Oh my...an excellent piece! The emotions have me lost for words
I love the ending to this, a really beautiful poem, superbly penned 
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PIXIE TAG!!
I am a visiting Pixie who has tagged your poem!
I love the elegance you have penned and am lying about in a bed of flowers, soaking in all the enchantment. 
Now it is YOUR turn to tag another Pixie's poem. 
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this is really wonderful as well!!..it has a very even flow, and rolls of the tongue nicely
its very exquisitely written, as well
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Another exquisite metaphor.
I am honestly left somewhat speechless... I cannot find words to express how deeply this poem touched me.
You are so talented.
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This is beautiful with smooth flow and descriptive imagery. You sent me an IM about it but I don't know why you are upset over it.
Love,
Amera♥
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what we have here is a masterpiece, which could only be painted by someone in love with life and the people around him..
well done johnny. i think this is my second favourite of yours.. the first being "our humanity"
awesome stuff.. it's amazing what a difference can be made when your heart is beating again..
write on
peace,
CT
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This is beautiful hun, the nice bif words did wonders for my head right about now... but the grace of the pen flying across the paper in which this was written... leaves something for whom it was dedicated to, to cherish... gorgeous as always hun
Karen
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this loveliest of Silent Knights,
entrancing Emerald Dawns,
as she pens longing, upon;
~ the parchment of my soul~
I can see the love and its intriguing sentiments especially when you are wrapped with the magical flow of the love with its unworded qualities bringing the peculiar description one by one..The immagery is quite solid and the flow and pace of the are just matchless..it is a wonderful sharing my friend..well
done...
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This is so well done, with such great insight and emotion, great job, John
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Oh my this is simply beautiful...
I adore the beauty and depth of each line..such fantastic imagery..simply breathtaking...
I adore Emeralds and this background is such a wonderful compliment to the poetry placed upon this page...Just beautiful...
Peace and many blessings to you and your Emerald Dawn...
~A~
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