Its an endless waiting
I know everyone hates,
The endless thoughts of doubt
That question that of fate.
It's like the falling dream
You never reach that end,
Just suffer pain eternally
A torment that wont mend.
It seems to last forever
Like time has just stood still,
Your heart feels hollow, empty
A space you just can't fill.
You feel that it's all hopeless
Then your heart begins to sing,
And dreamy, happy thoughts arrive
About what that day will bring.
This seemingly endless waiting
So hard it is at start,
But it's really not that infinate
So don't you fall apart!
Author notes
(In dedication to a good friend and anyone else who feels the same way)
Any1 else feel this way?
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Your timing started slipping
'bout on seventh line
but very well this
endless waiting feeling
said in rhyme
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Ahh yes , i see, you think i should remove the "the" in the 7th line? Thanks for your comment
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I think it would make that stanza flow better, yes
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Thanks for you help
x
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thy words arge within those endless pages where tears fall leaving one wondering without understanding why.
Interesting perspective!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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Thankyou very much
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