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Please Understand

I want you to listen
Please understand
This is how I am
I know it seems strange.

I want you to carry on
I just like to watch
And listen
I'm finding myself and where i am.

I want to be quiet
Im nervous but thoughtful
Waiting for the right time
To slide into the crowd

I want you to understand
Please Listen
This is who i am
Strange as it may seem.

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This is about how i am/feel around lots of people, i tend to just sit in the background for a while, and people dont always understand why.

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  • Third Orbit Mars
    December 10, 2007

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    hmmmmmm, "slide" into the crowd. that caught me, there. slide is such an appropriate word to use in that situation. it does well to describe your overall indifference on the subject ( one that i share, for sure). personally, i simply like the overall tone of this poem, and wont do it an injustice by trying to describe it. nice work.