The voices of the dead
Come to me in my sleep
They tell me to stay strong
They want me to continue to figure myself out
The voices of the dead
Come to me while I'm alone
They say "Don't give up"
"Your dreams are important"
The voices of the dead
Help get me through Each and every day
They remind me of the important things
And people in my life
That matter to me most
They tell me that I were to die
I would kill others souls
The voices of the dead
Come to me in my sleep
They tell me to stay strong
They want me to continue to figure myself out
The voices of the dead
Come to me while I'm alone
they say "Don't give up"
"Your dreams are important"
A contest entry
- Color me Morbid by Never Fall in Love.
390 points, ended January 7, 32 entries
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Wow
this is awesome... I loved this poem, it had so much emotion in it, you could feel it all the way through, I loved it It was not dark it showed hope, and perserverance, great job.. keep up the amazing work...

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This is not morbid.
This is hope. -
I love the message this portrays - don't give up on dreams.. wonderful. Good luck in the contest x




