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Voices of the Dead

The voices of the dead
Come to me in my sleep
They tell me to stay strong
They want me to continue to figure myself out

The voices of the dead
Come to me while I'm alone
They say "Don't give up"
"Your dreams are important"

The voices of the dead
Help get me through Each and every day
They remind me of the important things
And people in my life
That matter to me most
They tell me that I were to die
I would kill others souls

The voices of the dead
Come to me in my sleep
They tell me to stay strong
They want me to continue to figure myself out

The voices of the dead
Come to me while I'm alone
they say "Don't give up"
"Your dreams are important"

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  • jaguar eyes
    February 5
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    i loved it


  • football-knight
    January 15

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    Wow

    this is awesome... I loved this poem, it had so much emotion in it, you could feel it all the way through, I loved it It was not dark it showed hope, and perserverance, great job.. keep up the amazing work...

  • This is not morbid.
    This is hope.

  • DesolatELifE
    December 22, 2007
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    I love the message this portrays - don't give up on dreams.. wonderful. Good luck in the contest x