we went through the whole day without exchanging a word.
you spent that day fitting words together that sounded nice, but had no meaning behind them.
you just did it to feel like you had order in your life.
you said that you didn't hate me.
you just didn't want to talk.
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i can't take this.
i fucked up.
this sucks.
don't expect anything for a while.
I think i'm decomposing on the inside.
is it obvious?
My Lungs Are Locked. I Can't Cry Out.
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"you spent that day fitting words together that sounded nice, but had no meaning behind them."
-this is beautiful..
as is the whole poem. keep breathing.
~Gemma -
This is simple in a good kind of way...
You are a great prose writer.
♥Becky♥
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This is actually pretty good. It's all over the place in terms of flow but it's really graphic and cutting.
I loved it..
Keep your chin up....
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you spent that day fitting words together that sounded nice, but had no meaning behind them
That line is beautiful.
And I know how it feels.
All to well.
Well done, another beautiful poem.
Arc-En-Ciel--x
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=] thank you!
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Your poems make a lot of sense. I like that=]
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I liked it.
Sorry I didnt comment at first.
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"you spent that day fitting words together that sounded nice, but had no meaning behind them."
loved that line
-Jenn
*ahem* sowey bout the one appaluse thing. trying to save up points again...
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Nice baby.
I just didn't want to talk.
'You said you didn't hate me.
You just didn't want to talk.'
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