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Cave Exploring

I went Cave exploring
One day with a friend
Swimming inside and adoring
The Cave without end

The Ocean seemed to glide
Along a wide ledge
One could slip and slide
Right down to the water's edge

While playing around for a while
I heard other laughter abound
My face broke into a smile
When I slowly turned around

For there were severl Mermaids
Having a jolly good time
With long flowing hair and braids
And innocence so fine

They didn't take notice of me
And continued to have their fun
What a lovely time I could see
As they played there without sun

Slowly they seemed to swim away
With the laughter ringing in my ears
The beauty of the lovely creatures this day
Brought slow falling drops of tears

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  • Brazos silver member
    December 29, 2007

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    I never knew MerMaids entered caves! Thank you for telling me, I will be doing a little more cave exploring now.

    Thanks so much for entering our contest.

    Brazos

  • ennovy silver member
    December 26, 2007

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    Wow! this is a wonderful write, and you were so quite in that cave. No wonder you shed tears now...Thank you for entering our contest......novy