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Your World

For a score of years I’ve walked your world now
And for so long I cursed every day
And only now do I see my stupidity
And the mediocrity of my pains

I stood at the wayside of this earth
And watched as it all turned round
I seethed with grim ferocity
Watching men act like beasts and hounds

Not one of them cared about the future that waits
And nor did I for the longest time
As I wasted the best years of my life
I became like those monsters, rotting inside

And I blamed everything on you
The eternal scapegoat for mans own misery
When the responsibility for my troubles
Rests entirely on me

I wish I could be forgiven
Though I know not how to make amends
I believe I’ve met your angels
So I’ll do everything I can for them

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A dedication for some friends

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  • Yunaleska
    January 5

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    aww. wow yeah this has a lot of meaning like Rose said though I don't fully understand it completely lol. My mind's not right *slaps face* XD meh! But it's really cool and sweet and written beautifully. Thanks for dedicating this to moi and Rosie-chan! XD


    • Vallasch gold member
      January 5
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      LOL basically it's written as though speaking to God and realising that although mankind tends to blame everything on him, if life sucks it's person's own damn fault.

  • XxpuddlesxX
    January 2
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    wow you can feel the emotion so strongly as you read this i really like it, good job


  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    Sweet poem. It has a lot of deep meaning to it, that much I can see. You are such a mystery to me. Maybe that's what intrigues me so much.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    this is really good hun,
    its truthful and you really feel the emotion and deeper meaning,
    much love,
    Kitty aka bri
    xxx

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