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Babies Dreams

Angels touch
baby sleeping
sound

Upon a tall
pink rose from the
ground

Soft are the petals
with fragrance that will
melt

Tender dreams of tomorrows
growing more with each
day

A contest entry

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  • Broken-Bones
    August 20

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    This was so amazingly sweet. I loved your final stanza, it had so much hope and so many possibilities. You write beautifully. Best of luck in the contest. x
  • This was very sweet. I love how you wrote it. keep up your good work. Best of luck!

    CrimsonViper
  • spiritualangel
    December 31, 2007

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    Soft are the petals
    with fragrance that will
    melt

    Tender dreams of tomorrows
    growing more with each
    day

    Good choice of words. Best of Luck.