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Heart of Chaos

Although you’re not yet ready to know how I feel my love
And I don’t know if you ever can
I promise that as long as I live and forever beyond
I would always be yours alone to command

I swear that if you will it I’d never leave your side
Your eternal guardian and support in all that you do
There would be nothing and no one that can ever divide us
Not even death could keep me from you

I would always do everything to smite your sadness
And cleanse away the river of tears in which you drown
Just to feel your fingers interlocked between mine
Or to console you in my arms without making a sound

You’re nothing short of a Valkyrie to me
But you’ll never know the pain that I’ve withstood
Having to hold myself back all the while
But how could expressing love be anything but good?

But I can’t ever tell you the way I feel
Or how whispering your name can make my chest pound
Although one answer would be my heaven a thousand fold
The other will make all of my dreams come crashing down

Author notes

Yay another sucky attempt at a romantic one that's come out sad again. This one is an attempt to represent the fear and doubt in the hearts of all good, honest men.

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  • Yunaleska
    January 7

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    AWww this is so sweeeeeeeeeeeet! And so sad! awww. It's beautifully written and not sucky at all. I repeat, NOT sucky!


  • ObsidianWulf silver member
    January 7

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    Uhhhhhhhhhhhh *sitting and blinking* ummmmmmmmmmmmm *hits her head trying to think* wow it's great Vallasch well ummmm I can't think what to say it's had left me lost for words give me time it'll come *waiting for 12 mins*

    Yay wow wow wow wow wow shes lucky to have you


    • Vallasch gold member
      January 7
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      lol thanks to you as well angel's child. Though it's not actually about me, i don't have anyone heh.
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