Life goes on
Things go overlooked
Thoughts of yesterday
Things I wish i never took
Words I never said
Things I said too much
They never change a thing
Never no matter what
I'm still this person
Over looked by all who see
I'm still this lonely person
And still you all cant see
This dark I hold inside
This light that's just not there
I'm just this person you think you know
But your totally unaware
This person that your looking at
Isn't the me I used to be
Please tell me what you think
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This may sound odd.. but the last verse summed up so simply what I have been trying to say in a complex manner.. bravo on this whole piece.
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thanks for reading. i had the same problem i coundt just come out with it it took some time to make it simple it was hard but i finally got it
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this is a great poem... yet again i cant find anthing wrong with it. i have to agree that it should be in a contest, it could easily place.
~Nick
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thanks
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Baby.....
What a powerful read this one is! You did a great job on this one.... But tell me, why is this not in a contest? It is really good.
And you know where to find me if you need to talk.....
and love always
Grams.....
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thanks grams. i dont know why its not. its hard to keep up with ap now that i dont have the net. i have to wait till im at a friends or at school
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