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Three words

Three words were all it took
Two bodies intertwined
One night of heated passion

And all that’s left behind
Are careless linen lies

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Linen Lies

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  • Zayra Yves gold member
    January 27
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    great stuff anna!

    good luck in the contest!

  • celadia
    January 25
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    I love this simple piece.

  • Just4u
    January 20

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    Brings to mind the line of the song..."It was the heat of the moment"

    you played upon heart
    i denied it's passing
    while love watched on

    Hugs...Eddy


  • Tam gold member
    January 20

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    heart wrenching...

    truth dances within this lovely poem...
    so sad that linen sheets are often the victim of lies...
    beautifully penned!
    thank you for your entry!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Dave Powell
    January 20
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    Short and to the point. Well done.


  • DogFish silver member
    January 19
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    ... well, once bitten, twice shy!


  • Celtic Legend
    January 19
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    wow so touching! Great job

  • grannyeri gold member
    January 19

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    Some words are easy to say if one is used to saying them; and often others get caught up in this game of love, wanting it to be for real, but knowing that one night stands don't cut it. Liked your take on this prompt - easy to read and understand. Wonderful presentation on this page - great background.

    . Rewarded 6

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