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Onomatopoeia

(crunch crunch crunch)
the ice makes noise beneath my feet,
giving me away to you.
i am miserable at surprises.

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i was walking down my street the other morning, and i was nervous that i would wake my neighbors because it was so loud. haha.

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  • Eleanor Rigby
    January 20
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    THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! i love it and youuuu!!!!
    -the one and only plastic fantastic

  • Kelli Marie
    January 20

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    I know what you mean. The ice floor can really be loud. I like this. You just tell it like it is in real time. Very nice.
    Kelli