Venom flows through my veins
not going to let you get away
playing emotional games
~*~
Think you can ride rough shod
over my heart
with some trashy girl
I'm just about to start
~*~
There's a lesson to be learned
when you mess with the bitch in me
I'm all out for vengeance to make
you see
~*~
The only way to make you
remember my pain
is for you to feel it severely
exactly the same
~*~
Right now you are probably doing
what you did to me
Well that's ok, it's fine you see
~*~
I'm going to carve my name deep
into your heart
as I take my baseball bat and
smash up your car
~*~
Vengeance is a dish served cold
it's so sweet
Just remember that the next time
before you go out and cheat
Author notes
Carrie Underwood – Before He Cheats
~onesugar~
A contest entry
- Round 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lyric Inspired by rocklover91.
525 points, ended February 26, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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*GULP!*
Er...... uh........... well........... I should be really nice with this one. Very edgy here. Good thing this was inspired by Carrie Underwood's song.
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LOL!!! it's so good to have you back just love reading your comments.
Sweetness & Light that's me
~sugar~
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woooooooooooooo, rough one Sweetness, pretty rough but I hear ya. U better watch out. You never know who you dealing with until you cross the line. Nice!!!
~Lovable Swish~
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Would I do that?
Always enjoy reading your comments Lovable
Luv ~sweetness~
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WOW.... This is amazing!! I can absolutely relate to that (which is why I added this song)... Great job and best of luck in this contest!
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Thank you for your fab comment
I actually enjoyed the song never heard of her before (converted)
~sugar~
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Wonderful writing
The sheer power and emotion behind this was wonderful. I love the imagery that this conveys here. Anger, is supreme in this piece. Very well-written sugar.
Wayne
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Cheers hon
Sweetness and light really
Appreciate and value you reading
~sugar~x
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