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I hope you never know this feeling I have inside
As I look at you, my soul is on fire
Cos I know that I’ll never be as beautiful to you
As you are to me…

What do you see when you look upon me?
Just another freak that’s out to sate their desires?
Or maybe a dog, cos you think that’s the best you can do?
You’ll never know how in my heart I worship you

A queen among mortals that sees herself with disdain
I can’t bear to be around you
Lest I infect you with my taint

I wish I could be that sweet prince in your dreams
Don’t you know it’s your imperfection
That makes you so perfect to me?

Images of us together
They swallow my thoughts
You’re the mistress of my soul
And in your web I’ve been caught

A queen among mortals
I’m trying as hard as I can
Could you ever love me
For the way that I am?

I’m a slave to your will
I’d do whatever you ask
But you desire another
Whom I could never match

When I’m around you my senses are numbed
But that glorious knight in your mind
I’ll never become…

The queen of my life that I so adore
I hope you see some good in me now
Cos I’ll never be able to be anything more…

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Meh, had a few drinks and this sounded good at the time...

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  • still.she.waits
    February 1

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    this seems to me a little darker than the average "i wish she could love me the way i love her" but thats what makes it stand out. i love the twist of darkness that you put in.

    When I’m around you my senses are numbed
    But that glorious knight in your mind
    I’ll never become… <--- great stanza.


  • XxpuddlesxX
    January 27

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    wow i really like this alot. it's sad but i like how you pretty much get the point across within the frit stanza


  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    January 27

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    Sad and sweet, darling.

    "I’m a slave to you will"

    your, not you.

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