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[ Never Be ]

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You love her more than you値l ever love me
I知 thankful that I finally see
That in this world there痴 nothing but hate
Or at least it痴 all I致e felt of late

I was ready to die, but you were always there
Never letting me harm myself, not skin or hair
You kept me here and made me see light
Then you forgot about me over night

I知 alive but I知 alone
And I guess I should have known
That it was always her and never me
This thing called love will never be

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  • evanna
    September 7
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    Like it

    it's fresh and alive,don't know how to describe it but i do like it..
    Keep writing!

  • stephenlocke
    April 22

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    Good

    That was great!
    Very simple rhymes make the piece move along at a constant pace, you have talent mate!

  • P. W. Blackwell
    March 31

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    Wow Beautiful

    I really like this. I can't belive that you are only 14 you write with such grace and ellagance keep up the great work
    tori


  • a dozenglassroses
    February 18

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    Wow well when its not meant to be it doesn't happen this I have learned hard and strong... this piece brings that out so very well!

  • Zero-
    February 7

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    wow thts beautiful one question where did u get the inspiration? its great


  • Innocent Evil
    February 6

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    in this world there’s nothing but hate- I love you!
    Tihs thing called love will never be- EVERY BODY LOVES YOU!!!!!
    ya you got the point right? dont be sad get glad or ill get mad..... I wish i could help... it so sad, I LOVE the poem tho, Its mine.... I took it ! MUAHAHAHA JK.


    • GiftedPsychosis gold member
      February 7
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      OKAY OKAY!!
      JUST GIVE ME BACK MEH POEM!
      Or, ya know what, you can keep it.
      Uh-hu.
      You really can.
      :->

  • CrypticAngel
    February 6

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    This is so sad, and reminds me of feelings I once felt when I lost someone to another girl. It is one of the worst feelings in the world, but eventually you'll find someone who appreciates you, and the one who left you will realize what he was missing all along


    • GiftedPsychosis gold member
      February 6
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      Yeah, it's hard to lose.
      But I'll get over it.
      And maybe find someone else, like you said.
      Hopefully.
      :->

  • lemonhead
    February 6

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    NONSENCE!!! love will be there! YOU'RE A WONDERFUL PERSON, and i bet you'll be able to find someone wonderful as you!
    Great poem! I love it! It has a great pic too!
    Lemonhead

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