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He Will Fade

Love lost can never be found,
though most are blind to see
that soulmates and enemies cross the line
of inner harmony.

Kisses, glances, may all be false,
but when will they ever shine true?
I yearn for my dream of his face in my life,
though I know it may never end too.

The obstacles and challenges we face are unbelieving,
but may never compare to thee,
for love is kind, and does not judge,
except for you and me.

My dream is to find him, my heart and my soul,
though I know he may never appear,
I know he's there, and I feel his pain,
but our love can never reign clear.

Come to me, oh, my dear passerby
as I dream of your sweet voice.
I call to you by dreams at night
to give you the undying choice.

"Will you love me?"  I ask, alone and afraid,
skeptical to his reply.
"I will love you forever more, cara mia,
until the day I die."

The dream I had can only be false,
though I can feel that you were mine.
Your touch, that kiss, our sweet embrace,
the endless emotions in time.

The dream dissolves, a memory forgotten,
though a year later reappears.
What sign are you to interrupt my reality
and to rudely reawaken my fears?

I yearn for love, and know it's true,
but how much must I gain?
My dark thoughts and hateful words
have only eased the pain.

Let us dance, my love, through dreams and worlds
for tonight is the night we share.
I'll miss you, my dear, and the memory will fade,
until another time would dare.

"I love you," I murmur, as I watch you vanish,
and know that you must leave.
"Wait for me," you reply sadly,
and for you, I will believe.

Author notes

Ok, so this poem is basically a reply to the dream I had last night. The dreams was like a puzzle in the end, though HE stood by me the whole time. I hope you like the poem. I know it's a little sketchy, but I'll edit it soon!

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Comments

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  • Rat Baby
    February 24
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    Very nicely written...another wonderful piece!
  • Well, you put up the points...here's the applause...I've got nothing to say worth saying.

  • landis3133
    February 10
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    profound

    you have express your self well in this poem-and express how profound your dream was. you can get a real idea on how you truely feel.

  • grannyeri gold member
    February 10

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    Dreams seem so real and when we wake it is as if we were just there. Interesting way to write about the dream you had - easy to read and understand; liked the rhythm, rhyme and flow of the lines. Ending gives hope that this dream will come again.

    • Kuragari91
      February 10
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      Thank you! I hoped I had gotten the point across! Thanks for commenting! It means a lot to me!
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