Softly, ever so softly,
he echoed through my mind.
Gently and all but lovingly,
his words would always bind.
"Love me gently, my dear,
and I will live just for you."
So he kissed me ever so faintly,
like a fire can burn clear-blue.
Gradually...
quietly...
softly...
Author notes
Just trying this out. I don't know how it will end up, but yeah...here it is!
A contest entry
- Softly by Lj-.
300 points, ended February 19, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
You thoughts?
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Love it! Really....it's great! You always write from the heart!
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Thanks again, my dearest friend.
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I like it.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck.
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Thank you! Great contest!
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No problem.
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Awww this poem is truly sweet and romantic. I love it. You did a fantastic job with this. God bless you always in all that you do and write and best wishes to you in the contest. Keep up the excellent work. I sure do hope you win. I look forward to reading more from you when I can.
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Thank you so very much!
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Wow! This is such a sweetly sensual
and romantic poem. It is touching
and ahhh yes, perfect. great job
on this one. good luck in the contest. -
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Thank you!
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