It seems insane
that you don't know,
about this secret
i've left untold.
Thoughts of you,
my arms enfold.
My breathing gets
out of control.
Your eyes of heaven,
and hair of gold.
I'd die to see
your dreams unrolled.
I know my spirit
would be consoled,
if only i had
you to hold.
How long must
this go untold?
I try to tell you,
but courage goes.
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LOL yet another attempt at a lovey one that's gone sad.
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beautiful poem yet so sad >.<

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Thanks, i think you might find a repeated theme to alot of my poems now. =/
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hun this is really good,
we havent spoken in ages,
i hope your alright,
val youll get courage one day,
hope your ok,
love Bri xxxx
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Lololol. Uncontrolled in your title, hon.
A very nice simple rhyming poem here. You should write happy love poems sometimes.
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Heh thanks, i deffinately need to start checking my titles.
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I always miss my typos at first. I only get them after reading it over a couple times.
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