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Uncontrolled

It seems insane
that you don't know,
about this secret
i've left untold.

Thoughts of you,
my arms enfold.
My breathing gets
out of control.

Your eyes of heaven,
and hair of gold.
I'd die to see
your dreams unrolled.

I know my spirit
would be consoled,
if only i had
you to hold.

How long must
this go untold?
I try to tell you,
but courage goes.

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LOL yet another attempt at a lovey one that's gone sad.

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  • Yunaleska
    February 12
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    beautiful poem yet so sad >.<


    • Vallasch gold member
      February 12
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      Thanks, i think you might find a repeated theme to alot of my poems now. =/

  • Lost Vampyre Angel gold member
    February 11

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    hun this is really good,
    we havent spoken in ages,
    i hope your alright,
    val youll get courage one day,
    hope your ok,
    love Bri xxxx


  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    February 11

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    Lololol. Uncontrolled in your title, hon.

    A very nice simple rhyming poem here. You should write happy love poems sometimes.


    • Vallasch gold member
      February 11
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      Heh thanks, i deffinately need to start checking my titles.

      • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
        February 11
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        I always miss my typos at first. I only get them after reading it over a couple times.
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