Do I think of her?
Truth is; “Do I ever not??”
For in her is the answer,
Of my confusion.
Others come, others go,
Yet one permeates my soul.
In a timeless manner,
Like Monaco, in the spring.
Unmistakably, irrefutably~ beautiful~
Of heart and soul.
Uniqueness hand crafted by God,
Like the stars and the sunrise.
To not think of her is tantamount to
~ not breathing ~
And ~ as each of the seasons pass ~
With their vivid palettes.
She comforts my heart
With pastel kisses.
Slightest tilt of her head,
Invigorates my soul.
For ~ as all the others ~ slipped into the past,
She has become the beacon of my future.
Realizing that the way to love a woman,
Is to realize she might be lost.....
At any moment.
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Wow!!! The last lines totally blew me up!! Such emotions and imaginary! True, to truely realize and love someone from the depth of our hearts is to fear losing them. this fear gives them more value and makes us appreciate them. This was an amazing write, I am surely bookmarking this. It brought me to tear, just simply amazing!
~Noor
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Wow!
A really great piece Johnny, when did you go from great to awesome. The rhyme is fantastic, it flows so really well, and the emotion is magical. In my opinion, line four mighty flow better as "To my confusion", but that is just a tweak to a wonderfully written piece of work; even the presentation is wonderful. Awesome piece!
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This is gogeous! I can feel the ache in your words as I read. Some beautiful soft imagery, love 'vivid palettes' to name one great phrase. An excellent write
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Didn't strike me as Scarlett Johansson, but you were just plugging your poem.
"“do I ever not??”"
Why isn't the 'Do' capitalized?
"permeates my soul."
LOVE 'permeates'.
"In a timeless manner,
Like Monaco, in the spring."
Unique simile here!! Mentioning a real place (Monaco) makes it more...real.
"vivid palettes."
Must steal this phrase.
"At any moment" is a good way to end a piece... Has an intriguing feel.
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now I can understand. Juls
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This poem was, wow! That is the word that makes up for the millions I could say. Wow
-Faded
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dang, you are so romantic!
celestially beautiful...that's how I'd describe it
love the word 'tantamount"
there is such softness to your words!
glad I could read!!!
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Her light shines and guides the way, as a light house beacon. Her promise to stay...a sigh, as you breathe her in. At any moment she might be gone. Lots of great flow and imagery here! ~Sie
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Oh Johnny this is absolutely beautiful. I can hear you saying this to a friend and meaning every word of it.If anyone can touch your heart this way then it is meant that you are truly blessed. Love, C
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Wow!! The last three lines are absolutely amazing, and I hope to God other men feel this same way! For if they do, then all Hope is not lost.
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Incredibly romantic and so well-written.
"pastel kisses"
"beacon of my future"
Superb!
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so very beautiful
~A~
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Again... I am just appalled at myself for not having read these sooner... how did I miss all of this extraordinary poetry??? Each piece I read of yours leaves me yearning for more!
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The words reaches deep - if you love someone with your soul if consumes your mind and others seem to be just strangers in passing... The slight gesture of a loved one can mean the world (it's like magic!). Well written, brilliant end. Love the progression and flow of the piece and reinforcing the 'having love' by contrasting to 'imagine going without'.
This part was very thought provoking:
"Realizing that the way to love a woman,
Is to realize she might be lost....."
So, true. We only realize the value of something when we imagine without.
I love it!
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O' my what breath taking words you have penned for the heart...reaches inside and pulls out a sigh Realizing that the way to love a woman, is to to realize she might be lost...At any moment...wow!! niaish for sharing this with me...I do believe you are right about entering this piece
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Beautiful write and so tender and true. Love can be hard to find sometimes and shouldn't be taken for granted. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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exquisite!
I love the use of colors and the seasons to describe her love and beauty - she is pastel (soothing and calm) while the rest of the world is vivid (bright, irritating, overwhelming)... I also adore your realization at the end of how to really love is to know that it may not be forever...
If this were written for me, I think I'd say "this man really knows his feelings for me and isn't afraid to display them".
Beautiful.
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I would melt daddy if someoen wrote something like this for me!!! Very well penned!
Peace and Love
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