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Still Searching for My Higher Power (Form/Acrostic)

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~by Gregg Rowe~

 

 

       F

       a

B e l i e f s

       t

       h

 

       God

       rests

       at

       choatic

       endings

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  • Denerica
    November 23
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    7 words, God uses the number 7, especially in Revelation and yes God is more in the chaotic moments, resting, reassuring, and waiting on us, I definately loved this little message. Bless you.


  • Mel254
    February 29
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    this is a really good poem...i like the god part real well...i give it 7 applaus...but i cant so it gets 3

  • SilverSea
    February 29
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    Certainly blew me away. I loved this. So much meaning in so little words. Who knew it was possible?

  • Im2lost4love
    February 29

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    Interestingly written in so few words, an interesting presentation as well. This is well done for just seven words. Thanks for sharing. Jen

    . Rewarded 4


  • kvwriter silver member
    February 29
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    Wow. "God rests at chaotic endings." These four words really caused me to ponder chaos and catastophe and realize that, perhaps, God was there along. That's why He must rest. How much worse would something have been? Well done. This blew me away! Best to you in the contest!--Kel

    . Rewarded 6

  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 29
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    very clever lay out fine sentiment within the acrostic thanks for sharing regards zaj


  • Poesing
    February 29

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    I like the layout of this and the truth of it's message. Aren't you glad He's there when we need Him most? God bless.


  • Terry-too silver member
    February 29

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    . . . F
    . . . a
    B e l i e f s
    . . . t
    . . . h

    It probably will not transmit even with doubled spaces reinforced, Software being Boss. (I tried to equalize spacing in 'beliefs' to match linepacing in 'faith.' and have run into this kind of problem before. Grrr)

    God rests, to see how we deal with "chaotic endings"
    without interference?

    What a powerful set of seven words!
    Terry


    • lordoftherings gold member
      February 29
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      Thanks Terry

      Thanks for the idea of spacing between the letters of Beliefs...makes the cross look bigger now, and I like the acrostic in ligne with the base of the cross like I have placed it now...I think it's more powerful.



      Gregg

  • Gypsy Butterfly gold member
    February 29

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    I love this ~ beautifully composed and incredibly meaningful. By far my favourite 7 words. Best wishes to you in this contest. Many blessings, Lavender Butterfly.

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