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A Legendary Tale..

 

 

 

Of long lost love and ballads in moonlight
Eloping to death on a winter's night,
Passionate princess singing in vale's
Of them all, they've read in tales-
Princess Aida and prince, Radames..

 

 

 

Dancing with charm when the world just sleeps
Kissing in haste before the twilight peeps,
Leaping with love o'er the pyramid's tall,
They hoped not to do them all
But had to abide with destiny's call.

 

 

 

As they danced beneath the full moon's glow
That it would be their last, they did not know,
Wouldn't have let the breeze dry the chill
Of the last kiss lingering still ~
And whispered secrets echoing the hill..

 

 

 

And as you cross that dreary path, you'd hear
The final song, they sang so dear
With tear drops tickling down her face
He watched the glimpse of death in chase,
With a smile they shed their lives with grace
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  • Well this is over the 10 line limit but I would not change a word in this beautiful verse. Oh my goodness, I have been moved to tears with such perfect flow and wonderful rhyme. This is such beautiful poetry.



    How truly beautiful. Thank you for the opportunity to read such fine verse. ~Pamela

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