I miss
the things we used
to share. Time to ourselves
just the two of us. Now it's changed.
Gone are those things we used to do and take
for granted. Motorbike rides, free
to do what we chose and
could. This is what
I miss
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Very well written. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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awww.... i like it AP mum!!!!!!!!!!!!
great writter, i think im gonna attempt one of these rictameter's
love you heaps
xoxoxox
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wonderful just wonderful ur background and poem just add into one another rictameter its awesomee
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Cuz...
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SOOOO I lost my sweeties to send ya 
SOOOO I lost my sweeties to send ya
SOOOO I lost my sweeties to send ya
SOOOO I lost my sweeties to send ya
MWAH Cuz
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Wonderful and sad at the same time....Lovely rictameter.......
Rob..
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I'm sorry that you're still sad sis I haven't been there much for you lately either. You wrote a beautiful rictameter to express your feelings.
Love you 
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awwww auntie this has such a sad ring to it. I know you miss things and guess what I miss my auntie being here
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Aww hun yes I know you miss these things and I often think of the time together you have given up. I do so admire you for all you are doing and understand hpw hard things are for you.
Yopu truly are a gem
Gaylene
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coool this is soo much great i can vission all that things that u say and i miss them to wonderful write good lucks in da contest
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