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Hidden By Sun

          Crystalline
          Semisolids
      Brushing    Gliding
          Strangely
            Unique

           
          Mirror image
      Of every existence
            Graced
        By their delicate
         
           

                                Touch

                                      In this

                                            midnight

                                                          Glow.

Author notes

-Prompt-
20 words
Write about a season : Summer, Winter, Fall or Spring

Winter :3

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Comments


  • slightlyFey silver member
    April 1

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    Good word choice, and the flow of words both the rhythm and the actually falling of the words worked great. I love the beauty your words bring to mind but I have to say that I glad winter is blowing away...take care~ Michelle Fey


  • xxvampiregurlxx
    March 14

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    Thank you for this amazing write! It was again just what I wanted in this contest. 20 wonderful words!!!

    ~Ruth~

  • Lamia
    March 14

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    I love it. I like the falling nature of the words...like snowflakes haha.
    The midnight blue of the background really adds to it as well.
    A lovely poem. Good luck in the contest


  • Starlight-Owl
    March 13

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    Wow... This is AMAZING!! I love it! So perfectly penned. It suits winter really well. Bravo my friend, bravo.