An easy flight to a world away
Where all is nice with none but me,
A quick journey is all it takes
To lose myself in tranquil seas..
Let a thousand turbulent voices speak
In my world, still would music be
For, its just my mind which needs to fly
To lose myself in tranquil seas.
A cornered rose, in a garden of Daisies..
Full moon’s glow drenching the starlit sky..
Its solitude ~ where fantasy with reality sinks;
Smile or cry, but with ecstacy sigh..
Where all is fine and the world is mine
The time, the sky, my tears and dreams,
With many around but still alone ~
A sole queen, in the farthest realms.
A contest entry
- The Bliss of Solitude by Pamela A Lamppa.
3500 points, ended March 25, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is truly a beautiful poem, and i feel so close to it, its like you juts read my sould. the beautiful imagery
"The time, the sky, my tears and dreams,
With many around but still alone ~"
i love these 2 lines and i love the Title! i think many ppl relate to some time alone
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Lovely lilting rhyme in this beautiful piece. So well done and a splendid entry to my contest.
Thank you for such beautiful sound and best of luck in he judging. ~Pamela
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"Let thousand turbulent voices speak
In my world, still would music be..."
Wow...truly there is blissfulness in solitude for as long as we hear the music within our hearts...random noises from the outside are nothing...this is such an enchanting piece vividly depicting the given prompt...
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