Only tumbleweed rides on these rails now.
Only clouds' shadows pass along this way.
On the track I wait
and watch the weather
having arrived at my own journey's end.
In a list
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Must have been a great journey to elicit this poem.
Very nicely said. Thanks for your entry. David Wright -
The contest is closed for judging which may take two or three days. My thanks to each of you for your great entry. Happy trails.
David Wrigh -
You conjure up great atmosphere and feeling in this brief and finely-fashioned piece. Well done.
Bill
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This conjured up a feast of feelings
I would like to read about the destination you bought your train ticket for all that time ago. Does it live up to the description in the travel guide? Personally I feel it would be a shame for you not to get back on the train for a few more stops and write some more great poetry.
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Great poem. While I sometimes feel I'm at the journey's end, I know I still have some way to go before my rest.
Good luck in the contest.
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Great write Jimmy
Very visual, I must have sat there at some point hoping for a new ride.
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