I thought it was over,
But it was only the beginning.
I thought I was cured,
And yet, I still feel cursed.
Everything’s spinning now,
As my hopes are shattered.
Broken promises line my path,
I can’t believe I thought it was all over.
I watched as I fell,
And slowly got back up.
You were all there,
Even in the end.
I watch as silent tears fall,
My eyes turn to silver.
Each breath seems to kill me,
As I lie there in the night.
I thought it was a new beginning,
What a lie that was.
I’m truly getting worse,
And I don’t know when it will be over.
Why can't I heal these wounds?
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This an Awesome poem great job =]
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Wow, I can so relate here...
I like this poem a lot. However it brings up a lot of emotion that I don't really feel like dealing with. So I will leave you with this, its an awesome poem. Its executed wonderfully, and there is a lot of emotion too. Very nice.
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This reminds me alot of my past...
I use to be a really heavy druggie and I have finally broken free but for so long I felt like I couldn't get away. It was there at the start and it was there when I almost died but it wasn't there to help me in a healthy way...My drugs were helping me dig my own grave. I still feel stuck in away because I have it hanging over my head everyday...If I mess up again I go straight to prison and I'm not really wanting to do that.
But I can understand that this poem could mean a hundred different things...
--Madi -
Here, a rose for you. In hope that unlike this rose you wont be cut down in your prime and your corpse displayed as a sign of affection.
Just remember you can talk to me. I Know I can't help THAT much but I try and thats all that counts. . . Rite? -
I think you just need to talk to someone and that you need to know that there is always someone to fall back on when you're in doubt or in need of anything
kisses
-your Rain Girl
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