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Triple F Jam

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With glitz and glam
this funky slam
will blind your mind's eye
to the deal, to the steal,
Nuthin' left but the...feel
funk you, you funky funker

feels good, real good
feels good, give it up
get on board

Finger tips to cat guts meet
over stretched skins beat
can't tame that brass
with pressed vinyl, gap tooth smile
Tracks of eight never...final
funk you, you funky funker

feels good, real good
feels good, give it on up
get on board

Capped heads bobbin'
back beat's robbin'
measures from a crazy jam
where it's cool, and even Kool
No, keep that riff kick for your...self
funk you, you funky funker

feels good, real good
feels good, give it up
get on board

 

The music's the thing....

 

 

 

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Get the Funk Out!

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  • Xianaria gold member
    July 27

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    thank you for your entry! nice rhythm & flow, a fun read! this definitely reminded me of old-school funk!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    March 22

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    l.o.l.!

    this was hot! I love it! funny using funky funker, that so ole school! l.o.l.! great job my friend!


    • AzureBlue
      March 22
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      Thank you...I grew up in the 70's so this was a lot of fun to do...lol!

  • Mallig gold member
    March 22
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    This is such a great piece, very funky with creative use of language and imagery, perfect for the P-funk theme!


    • AzureBlue
      March 22
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      Ok...I feel a little better now...thank you!
      Great contest idea, by the way...love it!

      Lorena
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