I love you but
You don't know that yet
I adore you but
You haven't noticed yet
I've missed you but
You didn't seem to care
I kissed your cheek and
All you did was stare
I hugged you and
You look at me in total shock
I licked your lips and
You blushed then walked away
I see you everyday but
You think am stalking you
I think of you all the time but
You just say I'm blind
I write you a love poem but
You've not even bother to read it
I wrote you a love song but
You've not asked me to sing it to you yet
I knock on you window but
You basically ignore me
I knock on your door and
You opened it
I look at you in shock and
You smile at me happily
Cause now you know
I been your secret lover all this time
- Poetry for ages twelve through eightteen group list • next in list
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aww... pretty!
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thanks for your comment =]
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aww...this one is super cute!!
it made me smile.=D<----see told you. lol.
anyways good job.
keep it up=)
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Beautiful!
This is so amazing and beautiful! I can relate to this. I really love this guy but I know he will never feel the same. Keep up the good work!^_^
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I LOVED IT!!
I thought that this poem was brilliant! I loved the idea of it, there were a couple spelling errors, but hey, everyone makes those
Well, keep writing because you are definitly good at it!
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Very beautiful poem, good luck in the contest
*ROSE*
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This is sweet in a rather scary way... hopefully they take the whole crush thing on a good note, just tell em already.
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Awww.... I know what this feels like. Its an odd situation isn't it? The poem is pretty good, my only question is, how did you lick his lips without him like, freaking out and guessing you had a crush on him?
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what position did you want
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Good luck! hope when he does he responds in a positive way! I know he will! great job!
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wow this is awesome. for some reason it reminds me of thank you by dido, but i dont know why. and the title fits so well with the poem.
i really hope he finds out soon too!!
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This subject I chose for: secret love, I chose it based on a poem I wrote recently... It would be very great if you could read it...Its called feelings
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good luck in my contest
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aww.,.,
soo sweet, i hope he find out soon to! this is just what i feel... really nice!
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i love it. i can totally relate to how you feel.
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