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Heart's Suicide...

Missing image

Lifeless- lying on the floor
No (pulse) like an apocolyptic
world, after a N/U/C/L/E/A/R
Fall-out...all hope (abandoned)
Nothing, but grey, the frayed
ends, where your W/O/R/D/S/
cut me deep, all turning
B
L
A
C
K...

(saturated) in a lake of T/E/A/R/S
as if the wound wouldn't bring the
E/N/D- the self-sympathy will (finish)
the deed, making it Q/U/I/C/K and
...painless...numb...morbid-callousness

The cold, tile floor, the Red-stained
and F/R/O/Z/E/N/ tiles of the bathroom,
holds the (portrait) of passionate murder

No last words, no final requests, no
farewell goodbyes, just a loss of all
S/T/R/E/N/G/T/H and (sheer) happiness
In the end, all that remains, is the
haunting echo of U/T/T/E/R silence





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  • wonderful write... the dirty pretty look was facinating and so thanks for choosing one of the titles indeed you outdid yourself...only thing is to place your name in the authors note please (even though I know who you are) thanks for entering!