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He's Mine

    I'm in love with a boy
    I never met before
    His name is Ryan
    We just met last night but
    He shows that he loved me
    At first sight
    When I hear his kind words
    My heart beings to melt
    Like an ice cream cone on
    A very hot day
    My heart is racing
    Like if I was going insane
    When I look at his's eyes
    I smile at such beauty
    When I kiss his's lips
    I feel like I'm in heaven
    When he holds me in his arm
    I feel warm and safe
    When he protects me
    I know he won't let anything hurt me
    When he tells me he loves me
    I being to blush
    He's my world ..
    My everything <3
    No one can have him
    His's mine  and
    Only mine
    I love you
   
   
   
   

Author notes

I wrote this for ryan =]

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  • aww!

    This was such a lovely write! i love the way your portrayed your feelings with the words that you've used here... very descriptive! a very cute poem... i like it very much! keep penning!


  • BrokenAngel16
    April 22
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    Cute

    Awwh I love this so much sis great job I love the way you express yourself your so amazing <3 keep it up

  • mmmmm...

    I like it. I hope things work out between you.

  • This was uber cute! Aww... I could feel the love radiating off of it. I loved it! Keep up the good work!

  • i love the repetition and beat in this poem.
    its got some great emotion and a really powerful poem

    i can see the feelings

    well doine, good luck and thanks for entering

  • Awwww

    You keep calling me the sweet one but you cleary beat me by writing this. I'm really happy that I make you feel so good ^^ I love you too Maria and I'll do my best to give you a happy life
  • know one
    April 3

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    awww thats so sweet

    Great Write sis!!!!!
    is this about your boy friend?
    Great write glad to hear your happy!

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