I'm in love with a boy
I never met before
His name is Ryan
We just met last night but
He shows that he loved me
At first sight
When I hear his kind words
My heart beings to melt
Like an ice cream cone on
A very hot day
My heart is racing
Like if I was going insane
When I look at his's eyes
I smile at such beauty
When I kiss his's lips
I feel like I'm in heaven
When he holds me in his arm
I feel warm and safe
When he protects me
I know he won't let anything hurt me
When he tells me he loves me
I being to blush
He's my world ..
My everything <3
No one can have him
His's mine and
Only mine
I love you
Author notes
I wrote this for ryan =]
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Comments
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aww!
This was such a lovely write! i love the way your portrayed your feelings with the words that you've used here... very descriptive! a very cute poem... i like it very much!
keep penning!


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Cute
Awwh I love this so much sis great job I love the way you express yourself your so amazing <3 keep it up


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mmmmm...
I like it. I hope things work out between you.
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This was uber cute! Aww... I could feel the love radiating off of it. I loved it! Keep up the good work!

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i love the repetition and beat in this poem.
its got some great emotion and a really powerful poem
i can see the feelings
well doine, good luck and thanks for entering

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Awwww
You keep calling me the sweet one but you cleary beat me by writing this. I'm really happy that I make you feel so good ^^ I love you too Maria and I'll do my best to give you a happy life -
awww thats so sweet
Great Write sis!!!!!
is this about your boy friend?
Great write glad to hear your happy!


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