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Sweet So Sweet Is To Me.

This is all from my HEART.
HEAR my tale about my BETROTHED.
My DEAREST,
my LOVE is like a dove,
LISTEN to what I coo.
Bells with wings,
I  ring  for  YOU.
This I know.
All this from my HEART.
ALWAYS from my HEART,
I will ALWAYS be ADORNED to YOU,
my CHRISTOPHER.

Audrey Evans
11/14/2006

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  • Shannanagan
    August 1
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    nice write
  • lovely i liked it. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
    ..<3..
    Shelly

  • MeNoEmo
    June 12
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    pretty

    This was a very lovely poem.Thanks for entering!

    • rubyvaroom
      June 14
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      Thank you for your quick kind words on my work, "Sweet So Sweet Is To Me.".
      So, I'm now wondering if you found your insperation through your contest.
      Audrey Evans

      • MeNoEmo
        June 14
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        I have found plenty of new ideas.Each and everyone made me think of something new.Like this poem made me want to write something straight from my heart.Thank you once again for entering and good luck!

        Signed confused♥

  • imagineart
    June 4
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    Nice

    I don't know who Christopher is...but seemingly he's a lucky guy...Poem: Sweet So Sweet Is To Me

    • rubyvaroom
      June 14
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      First I'd like to thank you for your comment on my poem, "Sweet So Sweet Is To Me.". I'm pleased that you read my poem and got into it enough to ask who Christopher is. Well, Christopher, is the subject/focus of the poem, he is whom I'm adorne to. Thank you again for your comment and question.
      Audrey Evans


  • Good luck in my contest!


    • rubyvaroom
      June 14
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      Thank you for the support. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, "Sweet So Sweet Is To Me.".
      Audrey Evans
  • Humm..you tooke me into the depth of your approach and me smile inded..thanks for sharing a wonderful work...

    • rubyvaroom
      June 14
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      Why thank you for your nice comment. It's a cool thing when my work can, "tooke" a reader to a place of simple smiles and warm fuzzy butterflies of bad spelling and grammer.
      Audrey Evans.
  • This sounds like a love that's meant to be thanks for sharing in my contest
    • ReP: Christopher.

      Thank you for your support. I hope that you continue to read my poetry. It's an honor.

      Audrey Evans
  • SUch a sweet and heart felt write....quite the talented writer...It's short...but I like it kudos

  • fantastic. What a loving poem. Thanks for sharing

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