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Mysteriousness erupted from the heavens

Mysteriousness erupted from the heavens;
And out came those lucid crystals—
It cleansed – the blankness
And with humankind – I am left a cripple.

The discouraged long Vanished.
With thine worship spent awry—
I distinguish Immortality—
Amid Him; the sensation of abhorrent.

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I had to do an Emily Dickinson poem for an English project. I want to say I got down her style correctly, but that's just me.

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  • AdamAdkins
    July 7

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    Very dickenson-esq. and very good.

    I love her, but even without thinking of her this poem stands very strong on its own.

  • Chaos Star
    July 7
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    Oh yes you did. This is a fantastic poem, I love the imagery here. Great write!