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Timeless Enchantress

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So many colours within thy being, can anyone truly know them all?
A limitless spectrum, from a nymph of pure light,
Through all the shades of your emotion,
To a detatched shadow-dancer of the night.

All of these feelings may take their toll.
But to those who can see the collective power they afford you,
The full range of your spirit is beautiful.
Don't you see that all of your aspects,
Are as admirable and needed as any other?
Be it pride or anger, compassion or disdain,
All feelings are linked and born of eachother and thus can never be tamed.

All the dark and hardened thoughts help mankind survive,
And with your broad pallet,
You shall cut a clear swathe even in the darkest times.
There is no obstacle on earth,
That could ever bar your good will and relentless drive.

Whatever you might think, duality's angel,
Be you mortal, seraphim, darkened saint or enchantress,
There are those who sing to be within the circle of your lucent wings.
And no matter who or what you think you are,
Our adoration for you is timeless.

Author notes

Miss writing stuff like this, so thought i'd give it a try again. I'd written this by hand first so my vocabulary or ability to rhyme might be stunted.

The idea behind this was that my favourite subject gets uncomfortable about a lot of the nice things i say. Maybe because she thinks i've got expectations of her to be more than she is. I'm sure she also just doesn't like the attention heh.

So i just thought i'd send her the message that although some of the stuff i say might be fanciful or exagerated, one word that best describes her most assuredly is... Enchantress.

So if she's reading, you've got yet another nickname and it is true without doubt. So deal with it. ;P

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  • fantasylandthinker01
    April 22
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    wow thats a pury piece of writing

  • Ashleigh London
    April 10

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    This was fantastic. She told me about this so I thought I would come and see it! You've done a splendid job with this piece... you really captured her essence. Well done. I am impressed.
  • Yunaleska
    April 10

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    yep. as rose said, i think you're all MAD! BWAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA! but AWWW! I soooo love having poems written about moi *ego goes up another notch* LMAO! I like that nickname 'Enchantress'. XD very cooool lol Thank for the wonderful poeeeeeeeeeeem XDDDD


    • Vallasch gold member
      April 10
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      So to recap everything so far then, that makes you...

      An enchanting, earthbound, tomboy, angel, fairy girl.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 10

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    "So many colours within thy being, can anyone trully know them all?
    A limitless sprectrum, from a nymph of pure light,"

    truly instead of trully. spectrum instead of sprecstrum.

    You're so sweet, honey. I love this, because it's beautiful, and really does show a side of her we know too well. She's so tough, full of pride, even in her darkest times, she's still beautiful and loved and full of light.

    She'll think us both mad for saying these things, but it doesn't make them any less true.


    • Vallasch gold member
      April 10
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      Thankses, mistakes corrected. She already thinks you're nuts and that i'm a perv anyway, so let her think what she likes.
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