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Open Up Again

I want to give you my heart
I dont want us to be apart

I am afraid of making a mistake
I am afraid that I can't give what I take

I want to open myself to you
I want you to do the same too

I don't want us to hate each other in the end
I don't know if I can handle just being your friend

I can't begin to explain the feelings you instill
I crave your touch, your skin, your face your like a pill

I want this but I am afraid of how it will turn out
And that is my biggest problem, but there's something I know without a doubt

With you I am comfortable and your body fits mine like a glove
And as each day goes by I feel myself falling more and more in love

Author notes

Ok so this is for someone I am falling for. Now I must admit I hate having to type my poems but then again I love it becasuse I always get something from it for example while doing this one I realized I was whining and trying to find excuses because I am scared. I have been used to something for so long I am afraid of something new even if I want it. So anyway basically if your always afraid you'll never get to experience. Though I already know that sometimes I seem to forget as I am sure a lot of people do. So ummm yeah I'm done now.

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  • secberm
    May 13

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    Awww... I'm trying not to be sarcastic b/c I'm a hopeless romantic at heart and feelings like these described makes me nostalgic. However, life tells me (or at least MY LIFE) "Don't bet on it buddy!" LOL It's cool and fantastic to feel that way. To give in to those emotions. Ahhhh... So NO bad or tasteless jokes here. LOL Too bad I can't think of something classy! Just crotch and potty humor. Oh well, next time.

    Dez


  • rhondasail
    April 14

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    I didn't feel you whining at all, I feel you portrayed the thought process and emotional turmoil that brought you to an exciting decision. I like this honest write and I hope the one you're falling for is falling too ...Peace, Rhonda

  • Ah..this is the voice of the heart which you have portrayed here with the deep of the sentiments..well done my friend....