My decimated dreams; fading into the darkness,
No longer can I hope that I will last this journey,
the mask is who I am around you all,
There is no indication of what hides inside,
Dissipated hopes for the future,
The loss of my will, determining how deep the kisses touch,
Hiding from my own self; no longer wanting to see,
Failure takes over my life, not able to fight through,
Longing for the final kiss, waiting for the touch.
My decimated dreams; fading into the darkness,
The loss of my will, determining how deep the kisses touch.
Author notes
Just eh... I'll be better tomorrow... tomorrow is another day, there is always tomorrow....
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ooh this is beautifully dark corrine!
i love this poem of yours lots,
congrats on the silver there, i like this poem,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
Big Hugs
Things always get better. Don't Worry!
Dreams sometimes need some kind of a new vision to make them come true.
If it isn't suppose to happen then another one comes in place.
That's what helps us go on and why we shouldn't ever give up!
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I feel your misery and I'm sorry you know how it feels to feel so empty and alone... I can safely say as you know that I know how this feels. But you are never alone when people are in your heart, you always have to hold onto that.
Beautifully written, very dark and deep.
Loves xxx -
You can fight and get through this and you are never a failure. You know my thoughts on this subject because we've discussed it...at length. Just remember to take small steady steps and you'll be surprised at how far you can get.
Love and hugs always
Mummy 
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you know that the mask fails with me. im your evil twin i see and know all and if you dont speak I dont speak you know how the game goes. that text message i sent you. was all true
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