Take me out to the ball game,
get hit over the head.
Buy me some band-aids my head is cracked.
I will probably never go back.
And it's root,
root root, for the amb'lance.
If they are late it's a shame.
For it's one,
one
hit on the head
at the old ball game.
Author notes
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This is a poem I wrote to a cartoon I made. You can see the strip that inspired the poem at http://facelesscomix.blogspot.com/2008/04/dont-taunt-batter.html
A contest entry
- Positive Words by Shannanagan.
300 points, ended August 1, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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nice write
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hahahah
thats funny. i really like it. it was well written and very funny. -
this is too funny! x) brilliant write (and your comic is really funny too!!)
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hahaha! your writing always makes me smile. nicely done.
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