Sinfully seductive, luscious crimson pout
begging men to devour me in one fell swoop.
Emerald eyes, snakelike under dim lights,
glinting wickedly, threatening to undress you.
Extending my hand, I press myself to you..
Oh, how exquisite your pulse feels against me.
Sweat dripping down your neck, sweet warmth emanates
from your veins... I can already taste your blood.
But you slept with her, your siren;
You fucked her like a savage beast,
then returned drunk, spewing your atrocities;
I could taste her perfume on your breath.
I've licked my wounds, refused to fall
and now you'll both pay dearly for your sins,
for love made me a fool, and I promise
you'll never hurt me again.
Drenched in filth, I'll bleed the first dry,
until her sins are absolved, soul cleansed.
I can see it now... She'll look ravishing,
swathed in scarlet juices, a matching bullet in her brain.
I'll tear the second limb-from-limb,
choke the bitch with her own entrails,
rape her with knives in both wet holes...
That'll teach the slut to practice chastity.
Force-feed the third pieces of her own cursed flesh,
and rip the demon-spawn from her womb; she'll lie,
intestines spilling onto the floor in a tantalizing display...
I knew she couldn't have been that pretty inside.
I turn on you now, your eyes wide with fright,
and rightfully so... I'll turn you into slabs of meat!
You are as unworthy of me as you are of life,
and I'll mangle your gorgeous face beyond recognition.
I look upon you with repulsion; then kiss you,
spitting your own wretched blood in your face,
as I sever your diseased organ from your body,
to make sure that you're never unfaithful again.
I'm not the girl your parents warned you about...
Her imagination was never this good!
Author notes
Moral of this story: Gentlemen, keep it in your pants.
My serial-killer is female, killing the lovers of her adulterous husband before turning on him.
I am not, have never been, and will never be a serial killer. This is a fictional work, written for Ktulu Blackwolfe's Darkwrite Challenge. Enjoy!
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A contest entry
- DW Challenge Round 2 by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
525 points, ended April 22, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Macabre Medicines! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended August 24, 52 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is very good but i dont think there is enough of a story behind it for my contest. It is very well written and i love what you came up with.
Thanks for entering.
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Bloody hell!!!
Nice! Very! This is a gothalicious piece, and I love the vivid picture that you paint! The various methods of murder are all very well thought out, and my monitor is practically dripping with blood. Sexy, violent, perfect.
Good luck to you in my morbid little contest! -ge0rge -
Very nice moral lor lor! this is lovely, i love the way you got the message across, this is lovely, i adore this so so much, the poem is amazing with alot of imagery and kept the reader reading on and on! all my love thanks for entering
love you!
kitty xxx -
I'm not the girl your parents warned you about...
Her imagination was never this good!
I absolutely loved this one. You definately got creative with this one. Good luck to you.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
Its very very good I actually had to do a report on a serial killer that was female for my forensics class. Very Very VEry graphic. But I want to suggest one thing the very last two lines
"I'm not the girl your parents warned you about...
Her imagination was never this good!"
shouldnt her be their or maybe its just the way I'm reading other thatn that reall good work Hope you get First in the contest
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wow
you had my heart racing...you really get your point across lol
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Wow
This made me squirm. It was very intense but very good. The descriptios, the hatred, the revenge. Quite powerful.
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I love this piece. And just love the moral at the end nice one! Great use of the power of revenge at its most grisly.
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Wowzer! Talk about revenge
This is awesome, love the graphic imagery, divine visuals. I think women make much better killers personally, much more venom to it as you've shown here. Stunning piece, good luck in the contest 
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wow. between this and LadyDementia's peice i dont know who is going to win and i dont even know if i should finish mine!! it doesnt even compare!! its amazing. and i love what you did with the prompt. most ppl think a guy when they say serial killer, and this was an unexpected twist. good job and good luck!!
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wow this is one totally incredible poem. you tell em sissy. get em.. damn this one very graphic poem. I love the anger that I feel in this piece. the imagery is very vivid. wow. Can I watch??? blood, removing organs.. I absolutely loved this lines the best:
I'll tear the second limb-from-limb,
choke the bitch with her own entrails,
rape her with knives in both wet holes...
That'll teach the slut to practice chastity.
bookmarked it
good luck
DQ666
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i
love
this!
it's so dark and graphic, but still amazing!
great job!
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